Friday, March 31, 2006

It's a real, real, real Bad Poem and i choose to write it in RED!

i
am
a girl
who wears a pearl
who-
imagines her life to be in a swirl.

my
mother
is a woman
she is not a demon
yet-
she insists on guarding my hymen.

my
father
is a man
who eats from the pan
and-
helps my mother execute the ban.


now is it not baaaaaaaaaaad?

sorry UG couldn't resist posting it, and with you pestering me for new posts :(


17 comments:

medusa said...

i loved it.

uglygirl said...

why did you??????????

Runa said...

wat? why such contradictory statements?

Siddharth Tripathy said...

really bad...will get back to you with social-anthropology tomorrow

Runa said...

hahaha.

Lil Mizfit said...

plz excuse me if i don't visit ur blog 4 smtime. i need time to recover from poor oetry, or whatever that red thing in ur blog was...

Runa said...

oh did i give u a heart attack mizfit, now i know why Ug was stopping me from posting it poor thing is so concerned about ur health...

serendipiduous said...

ug and her lover gil be damned...i love what u wrote..go girl!!!

Runa said...

awwwww that was some inspiration. thanks re.

concerned citizen said...

It's not Bad. It's very insightful really.

It's not just the content of the poem, either.

You are being cryptic,(maybe that's not the right word) again. Wrapping it in red & telling us how bad it is, before we read it.

Anonymous said...

Solan ~ bad, but funny ;)

chitra said...

my
friend
is a poet
she is not pathetic
yet-
her efforts are a tad dolorific

AJ ! Serendipity !!! said...

hey it is nice
simple n sweet

Runa said...

oh such varied responses...

n I guess my purpose gets solved in receiving such comments for such a post...

hey chits good trial hahha.

myriadmind said...

mixed feelings. guess my being a part of the origin of this one helps. it doesnt matter good or bad as long as u write. that is always good.

Runa said...

yah i guess.

wanda1234 said...

thanks for sharing....


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