i
am
a girl
who wears a pearl
who-
imagines her life to be in a swirl.
my
mother
is a woman
she is not a demon
yet-
she insists on guarding my hymen.
my
father
is a man
who eats from the pan
and-
helps my mother execute the ban.
now is it not baaaaaaaaaaad?
sorry UG couldn't resist posting it, and with you pestering me for new posts :(
17 comments:
i loved it.
why did you??????????
wat? why such contradictory statements?
really bad...will get back to you with social-anthropology tomorrow
hahaha.
plz excuse me if i don't visit ur blog 4 smtime. i need time to recover from poor oetry, or whatever that red thing in ur blog was...
oh did i give u a heart attack mizfit, now i know why Ug was stopping me from posting it poor thing is so concerned about ur health...
ug and her lover gil be damned...i love what u wrote..go girl!!!
awwwww that was some inspiration. thanks re.
It's not Bad. It's very insightful really.
It's not just the content of the poem, either.
You are being cryptic,(maybe that's not the right word) again. Wrapping it in red & telling us how bad it is, before we read it.
Solan ~ bad, but funny ;)
my
friend
is a poet
she is not pathetic
yet-
her efforts are a tad dolorific
hey it is nice
simple n sweet
oh such varied responses...
n I guess my purpose gets solved in receiving such comments for such a post...
hey chits good trial hahha.
mixed feelings. guess my being a part of the origin of this one helps. it doesnt matter good or bad as long as u write. that is always good.
yah i guess.
thanks for sharing....
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