Friday, March 31, 2006

It's a real, real, real Bad Poem and i choose to write it in RED!

i
am
a girl
who wears a pearl
who-
imagines her life to be in a swirl.

my
mother
is a woman
she is not a demon
yet-
she insists on guarding my hymen.

my
father
is a man
who eats from the pan
and-
helps my mother execute the ban.


now is it not baaaaaaaaaaad?

sorry UG couldn't resist posting it, and with you pestering me for new posts :(


17 comments:

medusa said...

i loved it.

uglygirl said...

why did you??????????

wasted said...

wat? why such contradictory statements?

Siddharth said...

really bad...will get back to you with social-anthropology tomorrow

wasted said...

hahaha.

mizfit said...

plz excuse me if i don't visit ur blog 4 smtime. i need time to recover from poor oetry, or whatever that red thing in ur blog was...

wasted said...

oh did i give u a heart attack mizfit, now i know why Ug was stopping me from posting it poor thing is so concerned about ur health...

serendipiduous said...

ug and her lover gil be damned...i love what u wrote..go girl!!!

wasted said...

awwwww that was some inspiration. thanks re.

L>T said...

It's not Bad. It's very insightful really.

It's not just the content of the poem, either.

You are being cryptic,(maybe that's not the right word) again. Wrapping it in red & telling us how bad it is, before we read it.

Slain said...

Solan ~ bad, but funny ;)

chitra said...

my
friend
is a poet
she is not pathetic
yet-
her efforts are a tad dolorific

Ajay said...

hey it is nice
simple n sweet

wasted said...

oh such varied responses...

n I guess my purpose gets solved in receiving such comments for such a post...

hey chits good trial hahha.

myriadmind said...

mixed feelings. guess my being a part of the origin of this one helps. it doesnt matter good or bad as long as u write. that is always good.

wasted said...

yah i guess.

wanda1234 said...

thanks for sharing....


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