Friday, December 04, 2009

Knots


Tied up
endlessly
entangled arms reaching out
become
short knots
that cannot breathe
that cannot be free.

Looping in
the universe
the lives
fading out
& yet the light.

Narrowing down
lanes & by-lanes
sway in your head
till they are blurred
but there is no way out.

Panic
sets in
sets out
in intervals
you choke in rhythms
disturbing music of air plays in your life...

8 comments:

Unknown said...

who or what is choking u and making u feel claustrophobic then? tell me - i will beat em up

Runa said...

My work...it is just not moving anywhere...might end up staying an extra week looks like...but not sure on that.

travel30 said...

This comment is about u r DP, lovely pic, khoyi khoyi si massom si, he he, nice pic, and keep writing

Rohit

Nilamber said...

closing your eyes
take a deep breath...
think of your childhood...
go back to your dreams
search something in your dreams
or don't search anything
remember the face you like smiling
who is smiling.....
Now feel as you are in space...
Have any of knots opened up!!!

Unknown said...

@Nilamber - nice write :)Just the last line killed it for me

Anon said...

@author-
Things to do:
Update blog

Unknown said...

@Vrinda - thanks for reminding Vrinda...I am getting late on that. I need to do that asap.

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